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In Dreams
« Thread Started on Dec 4, 2005, 4:55pm »		[Quote]
It's just random enough that I think it fits here.

In Dreams

Nobody minds
Nobody wrongs
Nobody hurts
Nobody fears
Nobody does that in dreams.

Everyone smiles
Everyone laughs
Everyone loves
Everyone gives
Everyone does that in dreams.

The weather’s always perfect
The flowers are always perfect
The clothes are always perfect
The friends are always perfect
Everything’s perfect in dreams.

But nobody learns,
Nobody feels,
Nobody trips
Nobody heals
So nobody chooses
to live in their dreams.
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Re: In Dreams
« Reply #1 on Dec 10, 2005, 12:32pm »		[Quote]
AWESOME! woot woot!
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« Reply #2 on Dec 10, 2005, 4:54pm »		[Quote]
Love it!!!!!!!!! *stands and claps*
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Re: In Dreams
« Reply #3 on Dec 20, 2005, 3:42pm »		[Quote]
Actually, I might have put that in the Downbringing section--it's got this sad feeling to it. Maybe, though, that's because it shows a truth that can be hard to face. Dreams AREN'T perfect, because as you said,
"...nobody learns,
Nobody feels,
Nobody trips
Nobody heals"
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"I can't control my destiny. I trust my soul, my only goal is just to be. There's only now, there's only here. Give in to love, or live in fear. No other path, no other way. No day but today." -Mimi, Collins, Angel, and Mark in "Another Day"
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Re: In Dreams
« Reply #4 on Dec 22, 2005, 6:22pm »		[Quote]
I love the message of this poem. The use of the absolutes nobody, everybody, and always gives it a definite feeling. Curios way to look at dreams. I don't find it downbringing like Mara does. Rather, you accept the imperfection of life as the way we're ment to live.
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Re: In Dreams
« Reply #5 on Jan 25, 2006, 11:56pm »		[Quote]
Wow.. I must have missed this poem. But it is awesome! Great job!
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« Reply #6 on Mar 10, 2006, 9:57pm »		[Quote]
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« Reply #7 on Apr 21, 2006, 6:07am »		[Quote]
Hopin' u r havin nice dreams... Lerve u
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Re: In Dreams
« Reply #8 on Apr 21, 2006, 10:08am »		[Quote]
duuuuuude.... awesome poem.... WOAH! how'd I get here?!!! WHERE AM I??!! WHO AM I??!! AHHHH!! =S
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